About the book
Elect is
the second book in the Eagle Elite series by Rachel Van Dyken. The book was
published on Kindle on 10th December. I received an ebook for review
through NetGalley.
Synopsis
Nixon
Abandonato made a choice that put him in charge of everything. You see, his
family is a mafia family and his friends are all in on it too. After he fell in
love with Tracey, it marked her as a target to all of Nixon’s enemies. He
swears that he will do everything to protect her but the only way to do it is
to convince the world that he isn’t really with her. In doing that, Nixon ends
up pushing her towards his best friend but she isn’t quite ready to give
everything up just yet.
When family
secrets threaten everything that Nixon has been working for, it all comes down
to a life for a life but who will it be?
What I thought
Before
reading this book, I had no idea that it was the second in a series and I
hadn’t even heard of the first, let alone read it. So, it’s safe to say I
wasn’t quite with the plot to begin with when reading this one.
The plot
for this book, and this series, is pretty unbelievable and not in a good way.
The series focuses on mafia families and one that is now being run by a
teenager. I’m not sure if protagonist Nixon was put into power in the last book
or that was how everything started out. Either way, I just couldn’t get into
the plot because of how ridiculous it was. Not only is he running a crazy
business but he’s also going to school and trying to show that everything is
normal. Say what?! I maybe would have bought into the idea more had it just
been plain and simple. Why do mafia bosses need to go to school especially when
they have so much money?!
Anyway, the
characters were just as silly as the basic plot. Nixon is quite level headed
for the most part and does come across as a normal teenager, especially during
his scenes with girlfriend Tracey. However, at times he would just completely
flip, beat someone up… or worse and act like the mafia boss he was supposed to
be. I understand that this is part of the whole mafia world and threats and
violence are what gets people into certain positions but his actions and his
personality/ character just didn't fit.
Part of the
plot focuses on Nixon and Tracey’s relationship and the danger she is put in.
As Nixon obviously doesn’t want her to be killed, he puts best friend Chase in
charge of looking after her. A teenage boy in charge of protecting someone…
okay, that makes lots of sense. What I didn’t understand was how or why Nixon
put him in charge of security when he had older, more capable, people working
for him. Surely anyone else would have been better than a teenage boy filled
with lustful feelings for the girl. Luckily though, Chase was the most likeable
character in the book so that helped a little bit.
Another
thing that was disappointing was the lack of excitement. While there are plenty
of scenes that should have been very intense and thrilling, I didn’t find them
to be. I think people who liked this book more than me would disagree but
because I really disliked the plot and most of the characters, I just couldn’t
connect much with the story. Fights, threats and tense conversations should
have been so exciting to read about but I found it all to be too tame. I
understand that this is a young adult book but the plot subject should have
allowed for more.
As you can
see, I did not enjoy this book at all.